Tim, I understand that you're trying to eliminate one more advantage for the owl (seeing the martins), but with the other factors - noise & martins roosting on the systems at night - I think it's good to be aware that's just one factor and it's a lot of effort (in my case 72 gourds) for something that may be a minor factor compared to the others.
But I see your point with the cages / subdivisions, etc. What a pain! I'm so lucky to live out in the country where I can put up the ugliest contraptions one can think of and no one can do anything about it!

I really liked your other idea with the individual gourd cages and will try that on the system where I can't put in a full blown cage.
I think I'm resisting this modification because I am just so exhausted from the modifications needed to vent, and prevent predators, etc. Not to mention, deterring owls was the reason I purchased the long-tunneled horizontals / verticals & Trendsetter. And yet, with the best equipment, he came here repeatedly and now I'm concerned about the future of my colony.
So here are my thoughts: basically, the design you have above is the way my Trendsetter is designed, right? The nests cannot be seen from the entrance, as the martin enters and has to do a 90% turn to the right or left, yet this is the first system that my local GHO attacked. As they were all adults, they weren't roosting on the porches at that time, but they do make a lot of noise in that house - I've sat outside at 3 AM and have been shocked how much noise they make. And even after attaching a cage, he still went after the fledglings on the porches by grabbing hold of the cage.
Some of the videos I had from last year also indicated he was 'bumping' the gourds and scaring them out. I had one video where 6 gourds were rocking wildly and the owl flew past the game camera (he was a blur). My banded martin whose bands I later found in the owl pellet was in one of those gourds that he bumped.
Lastly, I haven't shared it yet, because I'm so stunned - in going through all the pictures that I archived (for "review later") from my game cameras, I actually found a series of photos where the GHO flew up to my Deluxe system with THGs and snagged a martin that was sitting on the porch. The pictures were so subtle, I didn't notice it at first review.